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Bug 739418 - Help needs updating
Help needs updating
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Product: gnome-sudoku
Classification: Applications
Component: documentation
git master
Other All
: Normal normal
: ---
Assigned To: Maintainers of Gnome user documentation
gnome-sudoku-maint
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
 
Reported: 2014-10-30 18:10 UTC by john
Modified: 2017-12-05 16:23 UTC
See Also:
GNOME target: ---
GNOME version: ---


Attachments
help: Update Saving/Resuming (626.45 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:23 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Remove info on notes from Basics (1.84 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:24 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Update Notes (2.01 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:24 UTC, Piotr Drąg
none Details | Review
help: Update Highlighter (1.50 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:24 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Remove Hints (239.17 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:25 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Remove Track Additions (583.60 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:25 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Remove Toolbar (1.77 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:25 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Remove Command Line (2.75 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:25 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Update links in the Get Involved pages (4.48 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:26 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Update Keyboard Shortcuts (2.68 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:26 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Update Printing current game (1.67 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:26 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Update Printing multiple puzzles (1.94 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:26 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Remove mention of replaying on the main page (922 bytes, patch)
2017-12-05 01:27 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Remove Advanced section (1.25 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:27 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Minor editorial work (6.27 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 01:27 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review
help: Update Notes (7.74 KB, patch)
2017-12-05 04:39 UTC, Piotr Drąg
committed Details | Review

Description john 2014-10-30 18:10:42 UTC
In 'Help', 'Strategy 1:', para 4 states:

Using notes, enter the missing numbers which are not in that column or 3x3 box, into the the upper field. These numbers are candidate solutions for that cell.

The word 'notes' above is highlighted (a link) that when clicked displays a page about how to use 'notes' as follows:

Notes
Notes, or pencilmarks, can be added to any cell. They allow you to mark possible values for a cell, or store other data that might help you. Notes will store all characters in order, but will remove repetitions of characters.
To add notes to a cell:
1. Select the cell
2. Click on the part of a cell that is above the line that appears when you hover over it. Alternatively, type N.
3. Type your notes
4. Press Enter or click outside of the text box.

A line does not appear when hovering over the cell and typing 'N' or 'n' has no effect. Therefore, the user cannot enter missing numbers in a cell. The paragraph following the above states:

You can also take notes in the bottom of the cell by clicking in the bottom of the cell or by typing M.

Clicking in the bottom part of the cell or typing 'M' or 'm' does not work either.

OS is Sparkylinux (Debian Jessie) with the Mate (1.8.1) desktop.
Comment 1 Michael Catanzaro 2014-10-30 21:53:13 UTC
We forgot to update the documentation for 3.14. Oops. It's probably going to need more extensive changes than just notes, so I'm going to generalize the title of this bug.

Anyway, notes still work, but you have to right-click in the cell now.  (Or hold Ctrl and press a digit key.)

I'm assigning this bug to myself because I think it's particularly important, but if anyone wants to work on it before I get to it, feel free.
Comment 2 Anders Jonsson 2015-02-24 20:41:12 UTC
Here's a small bit of related info I saw was out of date in the help:

The "Track additions" button that disappeared after 3.12 in the UI of gnome-sudoku is still referenced in multiple strings in the help file.
Comment 3 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:23:46 UTC
Created attachment 364964 [details] [review]
help: Update Saving/Resuming
Comment 4 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:24:19 UTC
Created attachment 364965 [details] [review]
help: Remove info on notes from Basics
Comment 5 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:24:34 UTC
Created attachment 364967 [details] [review]
help: Update Notes
Comment 6 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:24:45 UTC
Created attachment 364968 [details] [review]
help: Update Highlighter
Comment 7 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:25:10 UTC
Created attachment 364969 [details] [review]
help: Remove Hints
Comment 8 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:25:27 UTC
Created attachment 364970 [details] [review]
help: Remove Track Additions
Comment 9 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:25:40 UTC
Created attachment 364971 [details] [review]
help: Remove Toolbar
Comment 10 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:25:54 UTC
Created attachment 364972 [details] [review]
help: Remove Command Line
Comment 11 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:26:08 UTC
Created attachment 364973 [details] [review]
help: Update links in the Get Involved pages
Comment 12 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:26:25 UTC
Created attachment 364974 [details] [review]
help: Update Keyboard Shortcuts
Comment 13 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:26:44 UTC
Created attachment 364975 [details] [review]
help: Update Printing current game
Comment 14 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:26:55 UTC
Created attachment 364976 [details] [review]
help: Update Printing multiple puzzles
Comment 15 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:27:21 UTC
Created attachment 364977 [details] [review]
help: Remove mention of replaying on the main page
Comment 16 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:27:33 UTC
Created attachment 364978 [details] [review]
help: Remove Advanced section
Comment 17 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:27:52 UTC
Created attachment 364979 [details] [review]
help: Minor editorial work
Comment 18 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 01:28:59 UTC
It’s probably still not perfect, but at least it won’t be misleading anymore.

Also available at https://git.gnome.org/browse/gnome-sudoku/log/?h=wip/piotrdrag/help-update
Comment 19 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:42:45 UTC
Review of attachment 364964 [details] [review]:

::: help/C/save-resume.page
@@ +6,3 @@
    <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.26" version="0.2" date="2017-12-05" status="final"/>

I believe the docs team would ask you to add a new revision tag for the current release cycle, without touching the original one, and give it status="review". See https://wiki.gnome.org/DocumentationProject/StatusTracking. I think I've broken this rule more than a few times myself. :(

I'm (probably) going to mark all the patches as accepted, but please update this in all of them.
Comment 20 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:44:27 UTC
Review of attachment 364965 [details] [review]:

OK
Comment 21 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:51:26 UTC
Review of attachment 364967 [details] [review]:

Two changes here, please:

 * Let's call them "earmarks" (maybe even rename it to earmarks.page) since you can't add arbitrary notes anymore
 * Please also document the two other ways to add the earmarks:
     1) If you hold Ctrl when clicking on a cell, then it will open the notes popover
     2) If you right click instead of left clicking on a cell, it will also open the notes popover
   This being completely undiscoverable, it's no surprise you didn't know... proper documentation will help (at least the few people who bother to read it :)
Comment 22 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:52:22 UTC
Review of attachment 364968 [details] [review]:

OK
Comment 23 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:53:27 UTC
Review of attachment 364969 [details] [review]:

Yup.
Comment 24 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:53:40 UTC
Review of attachment 364970 [details] [review]:

Yup.
Comment 25 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:53:58 UTC
Review of attachment 364971 [details] [review]:

Deleting things is fun, right?
Comment 26 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:54:19 UTC
Review of attachment 364972 [details] [review]:

*stamp*
Comment 27 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:55:34 UTC
Review of attachment 364973 [details] [review]:

::: help/C/documentation.page
@@ +20,3 @@
   The <app>GNOME Games</app> documentation is maintained by a volunteer community.  You are welcome to participate.</p>
 
+<p>To contribute to the Documentation Project,  feel free to get in touch with us using <link href="https://cbe003.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.gnome.org%2Fdocs">irc</link>, or via our <link href="https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-doc-list">mailing list</link>.

Might as well fix the extra space here "Project,  feel" while you're at it.
Comment 28 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:56:09 UTC
Review of attachment 364974 [details] [review]:

I have to write a comment on every patch, or Splinter will crash. Poor Splinter. :(
Comment 29 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:56:32 UTC
Review of attachment 364975 [details] [review]:

OK
Comment 30 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:57:04 UTC
Review of attachment 364976 [details] [review]:

OK
Comment 31 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:57:18 UTC
Review of attachment 364977 [details] [review]:

Yes.
Comment 32 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:57:46 UTC
Review of attachment 364978 [details] [review]:

Removing features is fun!
Comment 33 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 01:59:35 UTC
Review of attachment 364979 [details] [review]:

::: help/C/strategy.page
@@ +33,3 @@
 	    <item><p>Determine which numbers in the row are missing.</p></item>
+	    <item><p>Choose one of the empty cells in this row. Determine which of the missing numbers are in that column or in that 3×3 box.</p></item>
+	    <item><p> Using <link xref="notes">notes</link>, enter the missing numbers which are not in that column or 3×3 box, into the the upper field. These numbers are candidate solutions for that cell.</p></item>

Normally I might overlook the extra space here, but not in a patch that's changing x to ×!
Comment 34 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 04:39:41 UTC
Created attachment 364993 [details] [review]
help: Update Notes

Addressed feedback.
Comment 35 Michael Catanzaro 2017-12-05 15:54:32 UTC
Review of attachment 364993 [details] [review]:

::: help/C/earmarks.page
@@ +25,3 @@
+
+<title>Earmarks</title>
+<p>Earmarks (small numeric notes) can be added to any cell. They allow you to mark possible values for a cell. Earmarks will store all characters in order, but will remove repetitions of characters.</p>

I don't like the last sentence here. I would say: "Earmarks allow you to store any number of digits in the cell. Each digit may be selected only once."

@@ +36,3 @@
+<p>You can remove a number from the earmarks by pressing <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>1</key></keyseq> through <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>9</key></keyseq> again.</p>
+
+<note><p>You can also add earmarks by clicking the cell while pressing <key>Ctrl</key> or right-clicking the cell, and then choosing a number.</p></note>

Add a comma here: "</key>, or"

::: help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
@@ +58,3 @@
 		</tr>
 		<tr>
+			<td><p>Add a number to the top earmarks of a cell</p></td>

Remove "top" since there are no bottom notes anymore.

::: help/Makefile.am
@@ +20,3 @@
 	legal.xml			\
 	license.page			\
+	earmarks.page			\

Alphabetize it!
Comment 38 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 16:18:19 UTC
Comment on attachment 364965 [details] [review]
help: Remove info on notes from Basics

https://git.gnome.org/browse/gnome-sudoku/commit/?id=f86e0693daf71508c06401d21ee27c5abd5e7f85
Comment 43 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 16:19:29 UTC
Comment on attachment 364973 [details] [review]
help: Update links in the Get Involved pages

https://git.gnome.org/browse/gnome-sudoku/commit/?id=1e228823fb45179654c34e2053229333e44aa1e5
Comment 45 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 16:20:14 UTC
Comment on attachment 364977 [details] [review]
help: Remove mention of replaying on the main page

https://git.gnome.org/browse/gnome-sudoku/commit/?id=cf9d5800db37ac87c9cb2f17748fe1896a7a0103
Comment 46 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 16:21:35 UTC
Comment on attachment 364978 [details] [review]
help: Remove Advanced section

I fudged the rebase somewhere, so this is now part of https://git.gnome.org/browse/gnome-sudoku/commit/?id=cf9d5800db37ac87c9cb2f17748fe1896a7a0103
Comment 48 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 16:22:00 UTC
Comment on attachment 364976 [details] [review]
help: Update Printing multiple puzzles

https://git.gnome.org/browse/gnome-sudoku/commit/?id=c5f28bfd8e865559f867410cff5be385d87328a5
Comment 51 Piotr Drąg 2017-12-05 16:23:03 UTC
Thank you! :D