GNOME Bugzilla – Bug 725985
Update get-help.page according to UI change for 3.12
Last modified: 2014-03-23 22:48:09 UTC
get-help.page needs to be updated according to the UI change.
Created attachment 271357 [details] [review] Updated get-help.page according to UI change for 3.12
Can you please also mention that the time penalty caps out at 60s?
Hi Michael, thanks for the indication, I checked the penalty time and it gets constant after reaching 90 seconds, can you please verify it?
You're right, it is 90 seconds, my mistake!
Comment on attachment 271357 [details] [review] Updated get-help.page according to UI change for 3.12 >+ checkbox next to <gui>Warn if too many flags are placed next to a Small typo: There is a duplicated whitespace... :)
Created attachment 271436 [details] [review] Updated get-help.page according to UI change for 3.12
Comment on attachment 271436 [details] [review] Updated get-help.page according to UI change for 3.12 >+ <p>Click <gui style="button">Receive a hint for your next move</gui> to There's no button called like that, but there is a button which displays a question mark in a square. It does show the text mentioned above when hovering over with the mouse. "Click the <gui style="button">question mark in a square</gui>" doesn't sound good either. Hmm, hmm. I really don't know what's the best way to express that. :-/ >+ reveal a hidden tile that is safe. A penalty of ten seconds will be added >+ to your total time. Penalty will be increased by ten progressively on >+ subsequent hints till the ninth hint.</p> The penalty was mentioned before, so you could say "The penalty will be increased". Also, "by ten" what? Probably "by ten seconds"? :)
Created attachment 272213 [details] [review] Updated get-help.page according to UI change for 3.12
Review of attachment 272213 [details] [review]: It is good practice to write a bit more detail into the commit message. For example, you may want to mention that the string in the preference dialog has changed and so has the main window. ::: help/C/get-help.page @@ +33,3 @@ + reveal a hidden tile that is safe. A penalty of ten seconds will be added + to your total time. The penalty will be increased by ten seconds + progressively on subsequent hints till the ninth hint.</p> I think you should specify that it's a button which is being pressed and where it is in the UI (top right) because it isn't clear that it is a button. ninth? Please spell check before submitting patches :)
(In reply to comment #9) > ninth? Please spell check before submitting patches :) ninth it is, my mistake!
Created attachment 272713 [details] [review] Updated the penalty and string "Warn if too many flags are placed next to a number" in get-help.page. Updated the commit message and the button information. Please review, thanks.
Comment on attachment 272713 [details] [review] Updated the penalty and string "Warn if too many flags are placed next to a number" in get-help.page. Pushed to master in commit 83d12b18547df68517390c23c06926f104ad1c81