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Bug 694745 - Privacy dialogs text could be improved
Privacy dialogs text could be improved
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Product: gnome-control-center
Classification: Core
Component: Privacy
3.7.x
Other Linux
: Normal normal
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Assigned To: Control-Center Maintainers
Control-Center Maintainers
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
 
Reported: 2013-02-26 14:41 UTC by Cosimo Cecchi
Modified: 2013-03-04 19:52 UTC
See Also:
GNOME target: ---
GNOME version: ---

Attachments
privacy: change "Screen Turns Off" -> "Immediately" (833 bytes, patch)
2013-02-28 18:32 UTC, Cosimo Cecchi 		rejected Details | Review
privacy: don't use header capitalization for some sentences (2.22 KB, patch)
2013-02-28 18:32 UTC, Cosimo Cecchi 		committed Details | Review

Description Cosimo Cecchi 2013-02-26 14:41:04 UTC 
- in the Screen Lock dialog, I find the wording a bit odd: "Lock Screen After Blank For -> Screen Turns Off" doesn't sound good
- generally (applies to other dialogs as well) text for non-bold options should probably use sentence capitalization and not header
Comment 1 Cosimo Cecchi 2013-02-28 18:32:36 UTC 
Created attachment 237642 [details] [review]
privacy: change "Screen Turns Off" -> "Immediately"

We use it another places, and it sounds better than the alternative.
Comment 2 Cosimo Cecchi 2013-02-28 18:32:40 UTC 
Created attachment 237643 [details] [review]
privacy: don't use header capitalization for some sentences
Comment 3 Bastien Nocera 2013-03-04 16:37:07 UTC 
Review of attachment 237642 [details] [review]:

We completely lose the fact that the lock screen is bound to the screen saving feature: "10 seconds after what?"
Comment 4 Bastien Nocera 2013-03-04 16:37:35 UTC 
Review of attachment 237643 [details] [review]:

Fine.
Comment 5 Cosimo Cecchi 2013-03-04 19:52:08 UTC 
Attachment 237643 [details] pushed as 5fdf836 - privacy: don't use header capitalization for some sentences

OK let's drop the other patch then.