GNOME Bugzilla – Bug 694522
typical processes: update processes
Last modified: 2014-02-18 16:55:53 UTC
gnome-screensaver is not going to show up anymore, since we have screen locking directly in gnome-shell, since 3.6. It might be nice to say a few words about what the role of each listed process is ?
Created attachment 239560 [details] [review] Added descriptions for all the listed processes from their respective man pages. Removed gnome-screensaver from the list of additional processes. I hope the indentation style is compliant with Mathias'. I am not really sure though. If someone reviewed it and confirmed, I can modify it accordingly. Thanks!
Created attachment 239571 [details] [review] Modified processes.page Changed the indentation style Added <app> tags Thanks!
Created attachment 239628 [details] [review] Added Sindhu's changes Added changes made by Sindhu and added credit for her Reflowed PulseAudio bit Corrected some bits Thanks Sindhu! :)
Can you please merge the two patches? At the moment, your second patch patched the first one.
Created attachment 242569 [details] [review] Updated patch
Personal opinion: Commit. I cannot judge if the list is complete, but the patch has been rotting long enough and cannot make things much worse. Any other doc team feedback? Enhancement: From a translator's point of view (translation memories, reuse of strings), splitting the string For extended information, please consider reading the manual page for <link href="man:foobar">foobar</link>. into its own paragraph (<p>...</p>) is welcome.
Review of attachment 242569 [details] [review]: Looks good to me. (In reply to comment #6) > Personal opinion: Commit. I cannot judge if the list is complete, but the patch > has been rotting long enough and cannot make things much worse. Agreed. We can always improve on the list if really needed.
Andre, about your suggestion, I am sorry, did not quite understand. Are you saying to keep the "For extended information.. da.. da.. da.." as a separate <p> tag common to all the items in the list instead of repeating it in every item in the list?
Yes.
I agree, but the links to the man page itself might be difficult to give in that case. <link href="man:foobar">foobar</link> is going to be broken all the time. Do you think a list of links to the man pages could be more useful?
I'm afraid I cannot follow. You have five times a sentence like "For extended information, please read the manual page for <link href="man:somepackagename">somepackagename</link>." It's not always the same but that does not matter for translation memories. The request is t o put that one sentence into a separate <p></p> section. I don't see how that will "break something all the time". :)
Created attachment 269434 [details] [review] new patch - with repetitions split into one <p> tag Andre, can you please tell me if this patch is okay?
Aruna: Thanks, that's what I was looking for. :) "gnome- keyring-daemon" seems to be the only typo I could spot.
Hi Aruna, can you please fix up the typo, push the patch and close the bug?
Pushed to master: https://git.gnome.org/browse/gnome-user-docs/commit/?id=f6db9fb77b2227c0bc64defb6d6dd45e6c3244d6
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