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Bug 681189 - Mallard documentation rewrite needs to be reviewed
Mallard documentation rewrite needs to be reviewed
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Product: file-roller
Classification: Applications
Component: docs
3.5.x
Other All
: Normal normal
: ---
Assigned To: Maintainers of Gnome user documentation
Maintainers of Gnome user documentation
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
 
Reported: 2012-08-04 11:13 UTC by Marta Bogdanowicz
Modified: 2014-11-22 12:18 UTC
See Also:
GNOME target: ---
GNOME version: 3.5/3.6


Attachments
proofreading suggestions (1.53 KB, patch)
2012-08-06 19:31 UTC, Michael Hill
committed Details | Review

Description Marta Bogdanowicz 2012-08-04 11:13:39 UTC
Subject says it all.
Comment 1 Kat 2012-08-04 11:20:28 UTC
I will try to do this in the next couple of days, help welcome.
Comment 2 Kat 2012-08-05 15:12:49 UTC
I have finished the first pass, and have requested proof reading.

Marta, can you check why archive-properties.page.stub is a stub and fix it up (if needed) for 3.6? Also, we should probably have some sort of troubleshooting page for plugins.
Comment 3 Tiffany Antopolski 2012-08-06 00:52:36 UTC
Hi Kat, 

I have pushed my edits to the master branch in this commit: http://git.gnome.org/browse/file-roller/commit/?id=494420867114294db50f8f828811252374f1a6c2

The edits consisted mainly of grammar, punctuation, and addition of missing articles and periods and removal of the "…".

I also added a link to the gnome-user-help/user-goodpassword.page in the password-protection.page.

I did not look at the stub files at all.

Cheers,

Tiffany
Comment 4 Michael Hill 2012-08-06 19:31:05 UTC
Created attachment 220491 [details] [review]
proofreading suggestions

Here are a couple more grammar suggestions.

Mike
Comment 5 Kat 2013-03-24 12:02:33 UTC
(In reply to comment #3)
> […] and removal of the "…".

The ellipsis should be in the <gui> strings because they are in the UI and <gui> elements are intended to represent the UI. I will revert those changes later today, but please let me know if you had a specific reason for removing them.
Comment 6 André Klapper 2014-01-26 13:04:20 UTC
Comment on attachment 220491 [details] [review]
proofreading suggestions

https://git.gnome.org/browse/file-roller/commit/
Comment 8 Kat 2014-11-22 12:18:13 UTC
Review long since finished. Thanks all!